ChookMother πŸ‡¦πŸ‡ΊπŸ¦˜'s Post

@Unixbigot Can I suggest having that also in past tense - " The hard step was ..." Jumping between tenses makes it harder to follow the narrative.

You might also consider capitalizing Hard Step, to link it to the previous paragraph.


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