Jay Stephens's Post

@Unixbigot @anne_twain
That sentence is not great as it stands (hence my tripping up on the "break down" which I DM'd you about) and this toot is, imvho, otherwise your best tootfic, period. The challenge of keeping the twist working as well as it does, retaining the callback, meeting the character limit, and making parsing it easier on the reader... is unenviable.